Q: What happens next? Emotion. Motivation. Don't describe. It's like a performance. Be a storyteller.
Is your story moving along? Do I care about what I wrote?
Drama is often negative. Conflict doesn't have to be unhappy though. Think of the truth in comedy.
Think of Dave in Vinyl Cafe. Find a personality with problems, and they can become your conflict that moves the plot forward. Create a character we care about.
Make discoveries. Follow the action. Make a treasure hunt, and keep leaving clues. Find a cue. Create a safe place, and then change a variable.
Editing is like playing a Jenga game. How much can I take out and it still keep its integrity.
In 8 weeks, am I a better writer?
Reminiscences
Pay attention to the point of view, and don't change it unless you make another chapter.
Layer the interaction
PROMPT (last week I missed):
Wool
By the ocean
Accident
300 words
a couple of characters
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for next week:
an unexpected phone call
holding hands
jump
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